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red mist
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 03:31:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Walking down the Dallas streets
My hatchet beside me
A thick fog dimmed the street lights
And I knew no one could see me
The sent in the air was arousing
There is nothing like
The sent of a young womans blood
I let my nose guide the way
But the fog made it hard to track
which way it was coming from
But I found her
Sitting on a bench in the park
As if she was waiting
Waiting for me to take her
I did just that
To my house in the shady side of town
Down to my basement
Where I tied her up to a chair
I went for my tools
My chainsaw, my rusty dagger
And of course my hatchet
She was so frightened she fainted
So I waited for her to wake
And when she came to
Looking at me crying
Face red with fear
She asked me why she was here
I said I want her blood
I chose my tool carefully
And picked up my hatchet
She cried for her life
"No, please. I want to...."
CHOP
In mid cry my hatchet came down
And here head fell to the floor
And the blood sprayed from her neck
I leaned over and soaked my face
In the red mist
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nightwolf
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2009-01-27 15:31:44]
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Re: red mist
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 12:06:22 PM AEST
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crikey, now that's dark! how unbelieveably callous and evil, but what great writing!
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Re: red mist
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 01:43:45 PM AEST
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| I hope this isn't a true story |
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Re: red mist
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by nightwolf on
Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 07:43:32 AM AEST
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| its not. i just enjoy writing psychotic poems and stories |
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