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The Plastic Octopus
Contributed by
khan
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 02:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was simple, a very happy chap
before falling into the credit card trap
but after I got one, I rushed to the store
brought home presents in a colourful wrap
My wife got excited, and kids were delighted
but none could see the spreading blaze I ignited
Fake power to spend brought-in a new trend
to consume more, without depending on a friend
Im passing sleepless nights, and dawns are a plight,
my ever-smiling contented heart now, is forever contrite
To the mirage of class and style, I lost the liberty, and my smile
why, sadly, I sold my freedom of being enslaved to a bank file???
Copyright ©
khan
... [
2009-01-28 14:33:53]
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Re: The Plastic Octopus
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 02:40:15 PM AEST
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yes, how fragile finance is these days. a catchy write, full of angst.
-phil |
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Re: The Plastic Octopus
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by simsalabim on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 10:47:19 PM AEST
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'twas soap....
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Re: The Plastic Octopus
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by shuronjona on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 11:40:53 AM AEST
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ha ha ha ha........
nice... bilkul sahi bat.......
thanx. |
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Re: The Plastic Octopus
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 01:42:29 PM AEST
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| The title of this poem is so creatively fitting |
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