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Alone
Contributed by
bluestars
on
Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 01:22:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Alone I'll be,
take care of me
wake me up,
when I die
don't fall without me
and everything I do,
and everything I've tried
has always been
the oppisite of sanity.
I push you out,
and you've come right back in
and every time I fall,
and every time I scream
you come back to put the pieces
that make me complete.
Alone I'll be,
"No more..." you say
as a single tear,
comes sliding down
her angelic face
and she says...
"And everything I do,
and everything I've tried
as always been
for us to stay alive.
Copyright ©
bluestars
... [
2009-01-29 01:22:29]
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tarheel_Treat on
Wednesday, 20th February 2013 @ 06:57:10 PM AEST
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| Wow! There is so much emotion and good imagery packed in to this poem. I honestly loved it!!! Good write! and to the right beat, it sounds like it could still be a poem to me! |
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