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One Last Try
Contributed by
DevinHman
on
Friday, 30th January 2009 @ 12:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Darkest Light
All the pain
And all the lies
Are sad reminders of the tries
To live
To love
To laugh
To cry
To lose or gain and wonder why
My heart remains full of hope
Only to be gagged and choked
Stabbed and bled until it's dry
My heart sits dead and wonders...
Why?
Is it the end?
Is it nigh?
Shall I give love one last try
Lonely days
Lonely nights
Lonely wrongs
No rights
Cut me loose
Turn me free
Release me from this misery
Fill me up
Drain me out
See my eyes
Scream and shout
Burning flame
In my heart
Burning flame burn this art
Art of love
Art of passion
Art of misery
To be rationed
One by one we all fall down
One by one we smile and frown
Make my way into the light
Find its dark
Dark as night
O Darkest Light
Copyright ©
DevinHman
... [
2009-01-30 00:44:27]
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Re: One Last Try
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 11:16:49 AM AEST
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| oh this was so good. |
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Re: One Last Try
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by ItsMeNow on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:27:44 PM AEST
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| Yes I liked this a lot. I used to write in this form short verses rhyming last word. somewhere along the way that changed not the rhyming just the ability to form short verses and still convey strong writing ability. Good job keep it up. |
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