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A Musing.
Contributed by
incognito_bombastus
on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 06:09:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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A Musing.
Early evening slumber,
In vacants between dreams & thoughts.
The fogging darkness of this strangest hour is
Struggling with deep breathing &
Hot marble serpent sheets seething,
Maiden monster sleeping power.
Sleep,
Soothe the screams of all ages,
Call us from mesmeric pages.
Drudgery & misery plant us
In these dark warm sagas.
Pilgrim to minds' mysteries
All hopes are answered there.
Every whim in whisper fulfil,
Natives in a stranger land
Of your naked spirits will.
I feel the warm sheets
Smell a warm & scented breath,
I see you lying there in unbound honey flesh.
Lost in sweet visions & its
Sweeter renewing death.
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incognito_bombastus
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2009-02-01 18:09:50]
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Re: A Musing.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 04:05:56 PM AEST
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fantastic writing I.B.! the imagery was perfect and it flowed wonderfully. top write!
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Re: A Musing.
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by kismetkills on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 04:58:47 PM AEST
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| great poem! i especially love how you wrote, "pilgrim to minds' mysteries." |
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Re: A Musing.
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by elle on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 07:50:52 PM AEST
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| extraordinarily delicious. . . ! elle |
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