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Pyre Ship
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2009 @ 11:56:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A fading light grows in thy eyes
As a pyre ship, sailing into the night
My soul still thine, through all emprise
Beseeching forgiveness, all too trite
Grand and empty halls, I wander still
Each passing day, to what remains
Heeding heart strings plucked to trill
When once there were loving strains
A prayer for a loves remnants rite
Upon cracked lips thirsting for more
Search thine heart fore the dying light
For such as was our Heaven before
Loose not that final alighted shot
Let it rekindle in thy eyes, what it is sought
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2009-02-03 11:56:20]
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Re: Pyre Ship
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2009 @ 04:13:31 PM AEST
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Well I see you are still hangin in there.
Great to have you online again.
big huggs, stay safe.
huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Pyre Ship
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by elle on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2009 @ 09:30:36 PM AEST
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| beautifully archaic. splendid of verse, as to persuade any soul you'd woo. peace. elle |
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Re: Pyre Ship
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 4th February 2009 @ 11:01:56 AM AEST
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| hello, missed your poems .Hope you are further inspired to write such beautiful poetry.lilymae |
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Re: Pyre Ship
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 04:49:05 AM AEST
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| Steve, I hope it works out for you. This was so sad. :-( Very good writing but sad, dude. |
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