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Paralysis
Contributed by
HonestInk
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2009 @ 11:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Mobility shatters beneath me
Life looks dim
Through empty eyes.
Nothingness, what I've become,
Wasted youth is a sin.
Falling to pieces and smash
Against cold earth,
No arms at my rescue,
Cries of understanding sting
Bones remain paralyzed.
A field of windmills, spinning,
Pour electricity into the air.
Wiring in my body rejects the help,
Existence is a prize of short breaths.
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HonestInk
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2009-02-03 23:27:34]
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Re: Paralysis
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 4th February 2009 @ 12:39:45 AM AEST
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I like it. It was nice.
You don't really need the commas at windmills, but it works with them as well.
Always, Abraham |
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Re: Paralysis
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 12:28:35 AM AEST
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| cool, i like how it's worded. |
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