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You See
Contributed by
PhantomsBBYgrl
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Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
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If you were me what would you see
Would you see your lovely eyes
Would you see your kindness that you show
Towards me
If you were me would you like what you see
If you were me would you understand why
I picked you
When you see what I see maybe you will
Understand
Just because other people don't see how Nice you are doesn't mean that I don't
You see what others see
I like you for that
And for that I thank you
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PhantomsBBYgrl
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2003-03-23 04:35:00]
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Re: You See
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:40:49 AM AEST
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Awww..this is sweet!!!
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Re: You See
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by The-solo-subject on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:43:25 AM AEST
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Great write. I bet The Phantom is proud of you.
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Re: You See
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:48:46 AM AEST
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Well now sweetie, and who was this for? Anyway it was another great write, you must have taken after me. LOL.
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Re: You See
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:24:16 AM AEST
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DANG The whole family are poets!
Great peice here! Keep writing! Christina |
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Re: You See
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 01:33:32 PM AEST
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this is very sweet and lovingly written, i especially admire, "Would you see your lovely eyes
Would you see your kindness that you show"
it really gives a vivid view into another's soul, huggs to you, nessa
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Re: You See
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by kims4ever on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:27:46 PM AEST
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| This poem has made me think of a special someone that is one of the few people I open up to. And i thank them for writing this. Hugs 4 ever. |
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Re: You See
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:19:59 PM AEST
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| Steve must be someone more special than I realized for him to inspire such a beautiful poem. And no matter what Dad says I think you take after me your style is more like mine....LOL. |
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Re: You See
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 12:44:48 PM AEST
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| Great Job!! Keep up the great writing. |
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