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My Credo(school assignment)
Contributed by
HonestInk
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Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 11:53:46 PM in AEST
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I believe in too many pairs of shoes
Pinky-promises, no crosses count
Redbull gives me wings
Carebears and coloring books
I believe in open windows
Reading under a shaded tree
Babysitting for free
Dickinson rather than Poe
I believe my glass is half full
Message in a bottle
Ipods and never cassette tapes again
Losing the training wheels, but buying a helmet
I believe Jones soda sings to my taste buds
Scary movies with a nightlight
Stepping in wet cement
June 21st
I believe in never biting my tongue,
while disregarding the teleprompter completely.
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Re: My Credo(school assignment)
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by Mars on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 11:00:29 PM AEST
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| It's nice but... it just feels kind of thrown together. If that was your intention, than it's ok though. Oh... I understand after looking at the title for a bit. I wonder what June 21st is supposed to mean... anyway, it's nice i suppose =P. I just don't really feel anything when I read it. Don't get me wrong though, its a fine poem. |
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