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True Difference
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 11:27:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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everyone knows
what's right
and what's wrong
but
do anyone really know
the true differences
of the two?
Life is so full of morals, rules, and lessons
that no one really knows
what they are getting themselves into a times
whether it is good or bad or right or wrong
you are still learning
either way you look
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2009-02-09 11:27:27]
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Re: True Difference
(User Rating: 1 )
by EveAlone on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:52:55 PM AEST
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| I like what you were going for, I suck at poetry so my advice my suck too, but I feel like a stronger finish is needed maybe. I was feeling what you were writing and I totally agreed, but I felt the need for a little more when it ended. I hope you take this right. I have trouble taking criticism, but I just wanted you to know what I thought, and I hope you don't find it critical. Nice job, keep it up. |
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