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Consequence
Contributed by
Daydreamer
on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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At so young Your song had already been sung At so young you were taken from us And yet you gave no fuss You made some unwise decisions Now we'll never know if you've finished your earth's missions Will we ever know through all the sessions? You loved the booze But you never thought it would come for it's dues Two are dead Two lie in a hospital bed The street is now filled where blood and oil spilled All due to your unwise decisions You've kept alive the traditions Of drunk driving As the ambulances were arriving News had already spread Leaving those to only dread Hoping it was not true Relizing they had no more chances with you Love and regret will soon In their hearts consume You've left this earth In which to you your mothers' gave birth In our hearts We will never part We love and miss you Alondra and Joanna
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Re: Consequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 09:59:41 PM AEST (User
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ohhh im so sorry for your losses, this is so sad, a lovely tribute poem for your friends, again, so sorry, hugs nessa |
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Re: Consequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChristopherFriedrich on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:20:47 PM AEST (User
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Sad, but an excellent write. I also did something on the same subject, called "Lesson Learned". Check it out, maybe you can relate. |
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Re: Consequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:25:06 AM AEST (User
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rhythem and expression are good.. it is pathetic.. neatly drawn poem.. well. welcome.. venkat |
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Re: Consequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:49:40 PM AEST (User
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God bless you and your talents to write poetry. I cried and I am dearly sorry about your loss. |
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