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Of Death I Must Abide . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 12:45:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Perhaps it was the loss of control in those last moments,
as though i was being taken over by some thing i knew
nothing of, how i struggled but to no avail, it was only to
apparent, there wasn't any thing i could do, oh merciful
christ, could this be what an animal must go through
while lying there as a predator is eating them alive, bite
by bite, tear by tear, slowly being ingested by a creature
determined to sattisfy it's veracious appitite, as the prey
simply has no choice but to accept the inevitible, i could
feel myself careening in and out of consciousnes, while
barely making out the distorted images looming over me,
in my hospital enviroment, that steril domain of morbid
inflictions where we come and go, most unwillingly, to say
the least . . .
So
this is what it comes to
minus the desire,
my weakening breath
imparts my death
time now
to
expire.
To
leave behind
such animation
ending my domain,
infested with anticipation
of impending
pain.
Lying here
amidst this realm
that threshold of deaths
door,
inside i shout
and squirm about soon to be
no
more.
What the hell is going on
tell me i am wrong,
lying here in brutal fear
knowing all
along.
That my life
would come to this
dispite how i objected,
enbalmed alive in deaths abyss
'twas not to be suspected.
My screams they fall
on deaf ears
while still alive inside,
asphyxiating in my blood
of pure formaldehyde.
Oh the insult of it all
let alone the pain,
deeper into death i fall
riddled with distain.
Ghastly
are the ways of death
ones life they do deprive,
so
what's another carcus?
to be eaten up
alive.
So
this is what it comes to
of death i must abide,
lying lifeless on this slab
though still alive,
inside.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
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myheartsvoice
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2009-02-11 12:45:01]
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Re: Of Death I Must Abide . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 01:30:50 PM AEST
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Ben,
I sure do love going down the dark trail with you.
Where in the world did this come from? Wow it has me on the edge of my seat.
Huggles from ur puggles
Michelle |
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Re: Of Death I Must Abide . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 11:03:19 PM AEST
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Don't get me goin friend, smiles,
I've stepped in-n-out deaths door more than once. It's the spirit talkin in this write.
I' sure pray you ain'nt planing to check out on us any times soon. I know that would break many hearts.
I'm with shelby, where did this come from.
Huggs, blessings, longer life,
emy |
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Re: Of Death I Must Abide . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 04:21:47 AM AEST
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| Holy (censored), Ben!!!! Morbid to say the least. Morbid, dark, and totally cool, dude!!! I enjoyed the hell out of this even though I was thinking what the (censored)? |
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Re: Of Death I Must Abide . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 07:14:37 PM AEST
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| Trhis is an AWESOME write. This is how I am feeling right now... though I have to admit i would embrace death if she came to me right now. Again great poem! |
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