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Look Closer
Contributed by
ChiChizz
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Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 08:07:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look up at the skies
Do you see that little speck of shining star?
Look into the deep water
Do you see that glimmer underneath?
Look beyond those vast mountains
Do you see the rising sun from ahead?
Look within a forest
Can you find that little round pebble?
Look inside a stable
Can you find that narrow needle?
Look across the ocean
Can you find that special person?
Look within my heart
Do you see that glitter from within?
Gaze into my eyes
Can you see that subtle, lucid glint?
Look within your heart
Can you find that spark of feeling?
Close your eyes and dream
Can you see the future we are making?
Then hold my hand and come in closer
Take a breath dear, and now embrace
Let me give you an oath of ever after
Thus our souls live for ever more
Copyright ©
ChiChizz
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2009-02-12 08:07:40]
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Re: Look Closer
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 03:16:29 PM AEST
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Beautifully written...
I needed to read something like this today...
Inspires and gives me hope....
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