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Valentine
Contributed by
kayceekook
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Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 10:27:57 PM in AEST
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There are days when the light just leaves you
There are days when the darkness just floods in
Those days, the confusion grows deeper
And the answers appear to be farther
While the doubt rises, the hope falls
And those are the days when you just need,
Somebody
Theres always a certain person
The one that you want to take help from
Because when its not that somebody
Your heart never seems to be satisfied
Your heart has never been so down
And theres only one person to bring it back up
And that person is him
Because hes the light thatll bring your heart up
Hes the hope thatll take away your fears
And hes that somebody
Hes yours
Hes forever
Hes always
Hes your Valentine
Copyright ©
kayceekook
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2009-02-12 22:27:57]
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Re: Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 03:05:58 AM AEST
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really nice poem :)
cheers |
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Re: Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 04:14:15 AM AEST
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| Quite exquisite if I say so myself. :-) |
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Re: Valentine
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by Live2Die on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 02:22:32 PM AEST
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this is really sweet. =)
i hope you have someone special to share it with! |
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Re: Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 02:36:29 PM AEST
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a very nice, upbeat valentine poem. good work.
-phil |
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Re: Valentine
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 06:03:16 PM AEST
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Soothing and uplifting.
Just what we all need in these dark Winter days.
Good write
Steve |
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Re: Valentine
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by navydocny on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 07:48:22 PM AEST
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Very very nice....
I hope that he's real....
Happy V-Day!
Steve |
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Re: Valentine
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by Recyclebin on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 01:04:27 AM AEST
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Loved it!! Classic poetry too its fullest.
Thanks
Sharin is Carin
~BiN~
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