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dont cry
Contributed by
misscharlie
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Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 06:16:36 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Dont cry
Please dry your eyes, Please dont cry,
everything will be ok, I promise.
I never meant to do those things.
He was mean,
did things he shouldn't
I can never forgive him.
I only did it because I had to,
I never meant for the knife to be there.
I just wanted to scare him,
make him realise what he did to you.
God I hate him so much,
I am glad I did what I did,
you said you never loved me,
and for this I hate you too.
I hope what happened to my stepfather happens to you.
Dont think Im been mean because Im not,
Im only saying these things because I love you.
Charlene Jayne Aubert
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misscharlie
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2009-02-13 06:16:36]
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Re: dont cry
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by navydocny on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 07:45:02 PM AEST
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A clear sense of desperation here born or hurt and anger.... It seems that there is a message about the hollow victory of vengence as well...
Great write!
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Re: dont cry
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by Jlokitty on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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