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All A Dream
Contributed by
crookedpoet09
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Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 07:13:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I see a man standing on an altar
I walk up to him and ask for his name
He stares into my eyes and I fall back
"This is my world, and you're playing my game"
Running away I open the gates
Falling down the grassy hill
I stumble and trip over a mound
"I'm coming in for my kill"
I heard as I looked behind me
That same man was flying high
I watched as he drew his sword
Threw it fast and hit my eyes
I laid back and fell asleep
A light shone through the cloudless night
The man who killed, screamed and screamed
"This is not my last fight!"
I see the light growing fast
I'm speeding in towards it now
I close my eyes and pray to god
That this will end too, somehow
I breathe in a panic, sweating bad
I drink some water in a sigh of relief
In my dream this demon dies
And my life's good even when I sleep
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Re: All A Dream
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:42:13 PM AEST
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Had my heart racing while reading this. It is like that spook movie you watch with the lights off and you are almost holding your breath in suspense.
Good work
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