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When I was young
Contributed by
shaonkra
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Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 05:59:39 AM in AEST
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When I was young
Limerence was strong
Love was just a crazy dream aside
Those feelings of opacity
Motivated me quite hastily
As my mind became diluted in her eyes
That upon stumbled misconception
Exposed a moment of affection
As angels enchanted this miracle from above
And it was then that was the time
When my emotions were inclined
To realise that this time I was in love
Limerence had to linger
With that strong string around my finger
And her beauty defied all defiance
There was no explanation
To the world of this creation
To much so to believe, it's just science
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shaonkra
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2009-02-16 05:59:39]
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Re: When I was young
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 05:08:07 PM AEST
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a very articulate and intelligent look at love. it could have almost been written by einstein! great work.
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