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Drifting.
Contributed by
Bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 08:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Fingers clasped around my broken heart
Meanwhile the rest of my body just drifts away
Soulless, I am just a breath of air
Longing to be the deep breath that you take in
Submerged inside your pale skin
A temple of flesh created to be the eighth deadly sin
And I alone fell head over heels with the evil inside
An undying love while the rest of my existence slowly died
Now the darkness leads me and I willingly follow
Carrying an immaculate soul by a body rendered hollow
A forgotten ghost, a vacant shell
A gentle wind blowing through the valley of hell
Amidst your wicked garden and the lilies of despair
Soulless, I am just a breath of air
Free floating through the memories
Colder than a dead of winter breeze
Bleeding through a sky stained gray
A haunting reminder of that fateful day
Still you keep your fingers clasped around my broken heart
While the rest of my body just drifts...
Drifts away.
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2009-02-17 20:29:26]
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Re: Drifting.
(User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 10:45:51 AM AEST
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| awsome write. so full of emotion...and imagery...nicely done. |
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Re: Drifting.
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by ShaonKra on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 02:41:46 PM AEST
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| Good, very descriptive and good use of imagery |
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Re: Drifting.
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by ItsMeNow on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:59:17 AM AEST
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| Great write. Very dark which is right up my alley. Keep it up. |
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