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Go On?
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 08:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can see everything in such great detail
But my reality doesn't seem very real
It's at best
A camcorder film reel
I feel like i am living in a nightmare
In a bad dream
A cruel horrific landscape
I feel sad
The Hurt fills my head
And courses through my bones
I'm swimming in my own mind
In my thoughts and in my emotions
Dear god i have no where to go
I have no idea where to go
The lost souls are all around
Every point of life
I've missed the ride
There goes the train
There goes the life
From my hands
From my mind
All ahead
Stop
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Onslaught
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2009-02-18 20:54:06]
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Re: Go On?
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by Loende on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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As someone far more clever than I said: Sometimes things need to fall apart before they come together.
I've been paddling at the bottom of the barrel for...well, a while, so I can understand the helplessness and hopelessness of not even knowing what to do next. I'll pray for you. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us.
Be well,
Loende |
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