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just a silence
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 11:34:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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if ever
I could not be me. . .
I'd choose to be
. . . poetry.
a page to span the centuries,
inclined to mental luxuries.
a song. . .
a dance. . .
for my names sake.
the questing point,
nostalgic break.
no matter
where my meaning lead,
from alpha to omegas' spread.
to feel the heart
challenge the mind
. . . stingy of word,
or profuse, in kind.
& being not commodity,
no consequence for being me.
there's the door
that opens, thus. . .
that I be line
manifesting verse
. . .exist in words' vast symphony
& boughs of silent harmony.
ahh,
if I couldn't be myself,
I'd wait
tranquil, upon a shelf
until I am epitome
in thoughts
that prelude clarity. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-02-20 11:34:39]
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Re: just a silence
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 01:47:02 PM AEST
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I love this. It is magnificent, beautiful, flowing, inspirational......and several other adjectives that escape me for the moment. It is... poetry!!!! You are poetry!
I need to read this again. :-) |
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Re: just a silence
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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Wow...an amazing piece.... I simply love the concept here... Great write
Jenni |
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Re: just a silence
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 04:23:41 AM AEST
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this is a very beautiful work, and so original! the imagery you used was very good and it flowed perfectly. it was a finely tuned masterpiece, great work.
-phil |
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Re: just a silence
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:21:00 PM AEST
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This... kicks... ass!
No need to think of more adequate words to describe how good this is... it simply, rocks!
Great write.
Impressed |
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