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Lets Share
Contributed by
khan
on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 04:01:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I see, observe
And I ponder
The more I do
The more I cry
Then I ask myself
Angry and hurt
Why, why, why
Why I have
And you have not
Why I smile
And you cannot
Your children deserve, too
What mine succeeded to
Just like that
Why then I
The priviliged,
Am still worried
About my future
And of my children
When will this greed of mine
Come to a halt
And When will I stop pinching
The only loaf of you
And yours
So you can live too
Copyright ©
khan
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2009-02-21 16:01:28]
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Re: Lets Share
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 07:00:43 PM AEST
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a very honest write. it carried so much truth in the subtle words. i liked how you were frank about the issue and got to the point directly, which had a greater effect in my opinion. good work my friend.
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