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my fence was white
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 05:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i sit now shaking from the reality i have just crossed
the image of a blinding light fading from my retina
the promise of everlasting drying to nothing
I have tried my best to listen to those voices that we inside
the ongoing battle of my soul
this war began from my first day of knowledge
when i was a snot nosed little punk
Even in times of darkness i have always felt something
but my cliff is coming fast
The reason i was made has only become clear
and the deed of my tale is not of the faith of heart
it was never in the heart i thought i was without it
This is just my silent scream, my battle cry
my white flag is showing i can not take the tare
i can no longer drown in tears
my fence is being knocked down
and i am falling with it
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Re: my fence was white
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:46:29 AM AEST
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i could take a lot of meaning from this. it was very abstract and thoughtful, great stuff.
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