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i see you in my dreams
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 07:16:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Eyes of a blazing silver star
Sunk in mystery
That gazes afar
Hair of silken black thread
Lips of lushs rosen red
And yet I wonder
What is your name?
Tell me with your crimson lips
What name keeps those hips?
Love me dont tease me
Who are you?
Your figure Illuminated in eerie light
There but out of sight
Stop this silly little game
Tell me your name
Your birthday
Your story
Anything
Are you tameless?
A wild beast
Are you quiet?
To say the least
I awake without a word from her
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2009-02-23 07:16:58]
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Re: i see you in my dreams
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:57:14 AM AEST
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| ahh, the mystery. . . nice write. peace. elle |
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Re: i see you in my dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:27:12 AM AEST
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ah yes, the mysterious fantasy. the taunting mirage of the mind. how i know this well. you described it superbly, great work.
-phil |
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Re: i see you in my dreams
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by rebelkitty4life on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 04:23:55 PM AEST
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| very creative, i like it =] |
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