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resentment
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:43:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I hate myself
when I'm resentful
nothing pleases
no sacrifice
numb beyond
the callousness
no calming place
to rest my eyes
a measuring
of circumstance
to approve
my apprehension. . .
attached to outcome
my position. . . it's heavy
but still I lift
& hold it high
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-02-23 08:43:52]
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Re: resentment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:22:29 AM AEST
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another very well developed and appropriate metaphor. lovely work.
-phil |
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Re: resentment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 11:41:50 AM AEST
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So sad!
So true!
So......beautiful! |
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Re: resentment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:55:10 PM AEST
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| *random hug* |
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Re: resentment
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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nice poem...i agree w/ every line, and i admire wat u wrote at the end of the hope u still hav. it's hard to keep your head up during such resentful times. take care
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Re: resentment
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by Spike on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 06:25:35 AM AEST
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absolutely. Such a petty impulse, but karmically weighty (tangibly) and life-souring.
Like a string of pearls, these words...
Spike |
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