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Good Going
Contributed by
Christsfollower
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 09:38:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Bells rang out from the churchtop
Early sometime this morning
Unaware that the springtime air
Would soon enough be storming
Young man returning home from war
Promises love to her forever more
Never did they will the sky to be scorched
But their union lives on, perpetual dawn.
Bells peal out from the firehouse
Early sometime this morning
Their home destroyed, lost to the void
Would someday be reforming
Building their life from determination
Unconcerned about social station
Theyve love and each other, come and pray, son
They will trust in God, give all that theyve got.
Bells rang out from the churchtop
and the loved ones all were mourning
Bidding farewell to life and to hell
His life serves as a warning
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Christsfollower
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2009-02-25 09:38:16]
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Re: Good Going
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:24:18 AM AEST
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some good imagery and a nice flow, good work.
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