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Prominent Writers
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dark_poet
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Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 11:53:56 PM in AEST
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The creative minds back when primitive times
Wrote about broken hearts in Vinca symbols
Modern poetry form from human kind used
Past era written antiques flourished by its uses
Be innovative about a category like passion
Similar and different like watching soccer and rugby
Diverse players all around examine there motives
A referee cant distinguish everyones activity
Perceive with your vision before you catch the action
Its respectable to embrace love for a counterparts fondness
Its despicable when all who behold auditory to listen
To read the same repetitive metaphorical remarks
Our past time prominent writers would rotate in disgust
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Re: Prominent Writers
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by kye on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 06:36:48 PM AEST
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I value an opinion but more importantly you write well. Keep in mind that not every writer/poet/author in whatever genre will have the same style or even level of talent. I would love to write in the style that you write-I can't.
Poetry is about expression, isn't it? Sometimes repetition makes for a better writer doesn't it? Just thinking on your words.
It is a great poem and it clearly speaks.
I guess I also wonder if "Our past time prominent writers would rotate in disgust" or might they treasure someone who gives it their all and puts a little heart into it.....
Thank you for submitting this poem for all of us to read.
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Re: Prominent Writers
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 10:08:08 PM AEST
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Great write
I can understand what you mean by today poetry has a lack of creativity but kye's right
people write on different level and different things. It's their poetry and while some think it's lacking in creativity they like it for it is a work of their own
Anyway again great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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