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The fire
Contributed by
ShaonKra
on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 07:23:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The fire flickers
And quivers to life
Ripening brightly
In the might of the night
Alive with light
Oh what striking a sight
Dancing romantically
In elegant delight
Brittle bark
Begins to darken ablack
Snap, whistle, crack
Spittin sharpened sparks fast
Striking the sky
A striped strata lilac
Respiring and rising
From spikes of dried grass
Lashing for gasps
From mounds of ground ash
Entrapped in the blackness
The crackling sounds pass
The fire shivers
It dithers and withers
Wilting away
To raw ruby embers
Of tender ros
Copyright ©
ShaonKra
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2009-03-01 07:23:17]
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Re: The fire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 12:41:34 PM AEST
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beautiful, lucid writing. a joy to read.
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