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Summer's Sky
Contributed by
SpreadYourWings
on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Verse 1
They told me that everything would be okay
That I could go through every single day
That I was suppost to make them proud
Soon to be disappointed in what they had found
I tried my best, did all I could
But whatever I did never seemed that good
I dont think that I can go on
Im leaving here, I dont belong
Chorus
I went to look but I was blind
Now the pieces I have to find
I always thought Id be okay
I never thought Id have to say
Goodbye you all
Now is the time
Its no ones fault
Except for mine
Verse 2
I never thought Id die this way
I wish that I had the courage to stay
Theyll never get what I wanted to be
Maybe now theyll remember me
The girl who seemed happy all the time
The girl they thought they'd never find
Lieing on the floor after one gun shot
I am the one everyone forgot
Chorus
Venia dont go
Kellem come home
Venia dont go
Kellem come home
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2003-03-24 05:35:00]
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Re: Summer's Sky
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:55:00 AM AEST
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So sad. Beautiful writing
sleepless_siren |
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Re: Summer's Sky
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:55:18 AM AEST
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sad song but i am glad you are here today to post it. good write
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Re: Summer's Sky
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:31:34 PM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Summer's Sky
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 03:36:12 PM AEST
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Lovely song, even tho it's so sad... I'm happy it's beyond you now.....
Jenni |
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Re: Summer's Sky
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by karoody on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:25:51 AM AEST
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| such a sad write...but very beautifully written |
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