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Blank Faced
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 04:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My Blank face
Just taking it
Just baring it
The grin long gone
What else can i do?
Emotions proved useless
This is it
I'm done with it all
I'm done with this place
Comatose is Wisdom
Now i understand it
Staring into space
Staring into nothing
Blank Expression
It's all that i can do
My Blank face
Just taking it
Just taking it
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2009-03-03 16:12:58]
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Re: Blank Faced
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 10:34:47 PM AEST
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Now that is sad....and well, that line "comatose is wisdom" is quite thought provoking!
Very nicely done.
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Tim |
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Re: Blank Faced
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by Antzus on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 05:26:42 AM AEST
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