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The Cardinal
Contributed by
Eireannach
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Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 02:19:15 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Simple things precious
Not noticed before
A cardinal dancing
Outside her front door
Hopping and chirping
Sweet singing was heard
She longed to join in
But could not speak a word
Her eyes made plain
All she wanted to say
So seed was provided
Each start of the day
Freedom in common
Was something they shared
Could it be some how
That the little bird cared?
And passed on to her
All she wished to do
With bouncing and singing
He helped pull her through
One cool August morning
A last beautiful day
Like the cardinal so cherished
She too flew away
2009 G. O Raithbheartaigh
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Eireannach
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2009-03-05 14:19:15]
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Re: The Cardinal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 03:41:20 PM AEST
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beautiful writing once more from you. the imagery was enchanting.
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Re: The Cardinal
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 06:54:15 PM AEST
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very profound, esp. at the end. i found this a bit sad at first, but then inspiring as i read. a moving, solemn piece of work. great job, take care...
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