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SOMEONE'S DREAM COME TRUE!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The first time I laid eyes on you,
My heart skipped a beat or two.
There was no doubt inside of me,
You were someones dream come true.
And then you spoke many words to me.
You cared what I had to say.
I looked into your piercing eyes,
And knew that day was a fateful day.
But that day before we parted,
There was a thing that I already knew.
It was there is goodness in this world,
As you became my dream come true!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/
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2003-03-24 17:45:00]
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Re: SOMEONE'S DREAM COME TRUE!
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:50:13 PM AEST
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beautiful, sweet , good write
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Re: SOMEONE'S DREAM COME TRUE!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 07:40:36 PM AEST
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Lovely...absolutely lovely, Rob..
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Re: SOMEONE'S DREAM COME TRUE!
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by Jaylee123 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:00:01 AM AEST
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| It took courage to express your deepest feelings. Great poem. |
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Re: SOMEONE'S DREAM COME TRUE!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 08:59:31 AM AEST
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A beautiful verse to show how you feel,
Just beautiful! Christina |
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