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Fly Little Bird
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 01:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fly away little bird
Away from the nest
Mommy can't always shelter you
From all the rest
You have to spread your wings
And jump toward the sun
Because your journey
Has only just begun
It's okay to be afraid
It's a normal emotion
Just don't sit and cry
You'll cause a commotion
You gotta have faith
Keep hope in your heart
That's always the best
Way to start
So fly away little bird
Away from your nest
Show the world
You're the very best
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2009-03-06 13:19:43]
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 03:47:36 PM AEST
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nice variety with this one, i think it worked well, it had a nice flow to it.
with love
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:11:49 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful and inspiring poem. It has a very encouraging and calming affect.
Very nicely done and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by kye on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 05:03:16 PM AEST
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Bravo Bravo! I am drawn to these types of poems. I remember reading a poem once about a little bird who thought it couldn't fly and then the mother bird - pushed and he flew.
This poem spoke of birds and of people taking chances. Not all of us fly toward the sun, some of us are coasters that hover toward infinity. *Smiling*
Wonderful poem, keep writing!
-Kie |
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