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Why'd I Do That
Contributed by
zakchrismoore
on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 08:22:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm srry
I nvr realized how special you were to me
I nvr wanted to hurt you
I hate myself for it
I hate that now I'm like every other guy
I want to be different
I want to be with you
She put a sparkle in his eye
With one mistake
She took it all away
Now alone inside
He listens to the lyrics of others
Talk about their heartache
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2009-03-08 20:22:55]
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Re: Why'd I Do That
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 09:36:12 PM AEST
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You know, it's a shame that the 'nvr's' and the 'srry' really put me off of this, because it's good, the words are all there.
Is it really so hard to spell out the whole word? Because the txt talk really ruins this. I'm sorry, but that's my opinion.
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