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Save The World
Contributed by
Crookedpoet09
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Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 06:34:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Wake the eyes of a thousand children
Show them their dreams can be believed in
It only takes a heart of strong
To show these people where they belong
Dont rule the world but walk with it
Take a chance when thats the ticket
Being afraid made us stronger so
Feeling scared is fine you know
Live in a new life; breathe in a new air
Dont be afraid if its your problems youll share
A difference can be made by believing in the words
A difference can be done if you save the world
Can you look and listen to this tale of hope?
Ensure they know and hold the rope?
Dont judge someone when you dont know them
Ask them their name; even get to know them
So speak the words of a thousand children
Show them love is something to believe in
For a difference can be made my boys and girls
A difference can be done if you save the world
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Re: Save The World
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by dark_poet on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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the children will continue this world, hopefully leading it to the right path. this was well written piece, nothing to complex but fairly simple to read. your basic choice of words brought out the meaning of this piece and the flow was on point.
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