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Sweet Misery.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 08:13:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sweet misery
You got me crying
You got me trying
Trying to breathe
Trying to break free
But I can't escape you
No, not you sweet misery
You've become a part of me
Like an ill-fated destiny
You got the best of me
Still you won't let go, no
Not you sweet misery
You're the core of my history
My forecast into tomorrow
The barer of my sorrow
And after all these years
And all these tears
You still find ways to erase the blue from my skies
Oh sweet misery
How you lay heavy inside my eyes
You keep my heart broken
So silent and unspoken
But you never neglect me
No, not you sweet misery
You leave me no place to hide
You're always right by side
Showering me with those painful memories
Crawling on hands and knees
Oh how you love to watch me suffer
You're truly evil like no other
Sweet misery, my star crossed lover
When dreams aren't made to come true
When I lose everything I ever loved
I'll always have you...
My sweet sweet misery.
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Re: Sweet Misery.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 09:48:17 PM AEST
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Ah the sweet misery I seem to know this word well of late. Life seems cruel at times no doubt.
What can we do about it though? SIt down or try harder??
Incredible verse, I felt this deeply, could make me cry.
Hope misery leaves you soon
hugs and hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Sweet Misery.
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by Ess3nc3 on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 10:00:03 PM AEST
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| Only one thing wrong with this poem, and that is a single spelling mistake on the 15th verse. "Barer," should be spelled, "bearer." Other than that, excellent job. A very somber piece of literature, well written. Not sure what motivated you to write this poem, but I hope things get better if you are experiencing a misfortunate time in your life. We've all been there, and sometimes it just seems like misery won't let go. Then you keep pushing and pushing, it still won't let go. When you think you've lost all hope and motivation in life, that's what either makes you or breaks you. Take care my friend and keep writing. |
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