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SILENT TEARS
Contributed by
smurfette
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Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I shed a tear last night,
Silently I felt it fall,
I heard it hit your hand,
When you suddenly yelled and called.
You held it tight within your hand,
You saw me hanging there,
I just wished you'd understand.
You fell to your knees and started to cry,
You screamed and screamed and asked me why?
I know inside, you know why I did it,
I just hope you forgive me,
Because I fear it.
I wish I had told you one last time,
Just how much I love you,
Feel for you,
And care for you.
We'll meet again so please don't worry,
I wish I didn't cause so much pain,
For those who loved me so,
I'm here to say I love you and I'm so
SORRY
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smurfette
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2003-03-24 20:45:00]
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Re: SILENT TEARS
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by Jaylee123 on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:39:21 PM AEST
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| I think the writer of this poem had thought about death. Then may have changed his or her mind. Maybe the poem was meant to help others who are thinking about it. |
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Re: SILENT TEARS
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by Smurfette on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:15:32 AM AEST
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| i think that this poem that i wrote would help out alot of people who do suffer with problems or any sort of issues..and they may think twice about suicide, if any one who reads this poem and is thinking about killing themselves just think about all the loved ones who do love you and think about where u would do it and think about who would find you....think how they would react when they see you lieing there,hanging there or however you may do it....just think about other people first before you act on doing something as crucial as this...... |
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Re: SILENT TEARS
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by Smurfette on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:15:44 AM AEST
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| i think that this poem that i wrote would help out alot of people who do suffer with problems or any sort of issues..and they may think twice about suicide, if any one who reads this poem and is thinking about killing themselves just think about all the loved ones who do love you and think about where u would do it and think about who would find you....think how they would react when they see you lieing there,hanging there or however you may do it....just think about other people first before you act on doing something as crucial as this...... |
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Re: SILENT TEARS
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by arakrune on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:32:21 AM AEST
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| a beautiful poem and it could be taken as a comment on the price you pay and deal out to those around you that love you when you are committing suicide or a comment and thought on what you actions can cause whatever they may be such as when you cheat on one you love |
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Re: SILENT TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:52:44 AM AEST
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What a fantastic poem. Such deep emotion which is written so beautifully.
Suicide is so hard for thse left behind but what I think a lot of people don't realise is that if a person takes their own life, they were so desperate and didn't know what to do anymore.
They would have thought about how much it is going to hurt the ones left behind and if their problems seem to immense that even that cannot disuade them, they feel there is nothing left for them.
I believe that it takes utter desperation to take your own life and more courage than anyone can every imagine to not give up and to choose to live.
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