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Release
Contributed by
ScarlettsFever
on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 05:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sweet death
Bring me sweet release
Take me far away from this place
This place that brings me such pain,
Brings me such misery.
Looking up toward the skies
Asking for the light
Praying for this life to let me go.
Open wounds and blood stained patterns
Toss me to my shallow grave
Let me go, let me go
Sweet release, my misery.
The taste of blood the sound of my own screams
The darkness that surrounds
The silence that fills my mind
A quick end to my misery
This, my quick release.
Sweet death, sweet release
Bring my end, set me free
Cant take no more,
No more pain, I feel that I am no longer sane
Now closed off inside.
Sweet death, wont you come for me?
Will you not liberate me.
Copyright ©
ScarlettsFever
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2009-03-11 05:34:53]
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Re: Release
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 08:41:07 AM AEST
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nice piece
-phil |
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Re: Release
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by dark_poet on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:33:44 AM AEST
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it was an alright written piece. Nothing really caught my eyes creatively other than your agony, but i enjoyed how you fought with your selfconscious or other.
7/10 it was ok |
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