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moonlight
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
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Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:29:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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dance with me for just one night,
spin me around and hold me tight,
staring into your eyes is such a beautiful sight,
just you and i dancing in the moonlight,
our movements are flowing and smooth as we dance to the sound of a spanish guitar,
feeling the cool gentle ocean breeze softly blowing against us,
not even the beauty and romance of italy,
could not compare to the beauty and romance that fills our tropical oasis,
we shall dance all night,
and twril and glide into the morning light,
still holding eachother tight,
i want to spend the rest of my life dancing with you in the moonlight.
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2009-03-11 09:29:40]
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Re: moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:43:45 AM AEST
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Incredible! The imagery was beautiful and appropriate, and the Spanish guitar is my favourite instrument! Great write!
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Re: moonlight
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 10:33:51 AM AEST
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Very well done. I really enjoyed reading this poem... the way it made me feel is incredible.
With Love,
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Re: moonlight
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 07:03:58 PM AEST
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Oh this is reallly a wonderful write.. It leaves the reader on a 'high'.... Well executed!!
(I think the 'not' in the last line of the 2nd verse should be deleted)
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