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Let Me Dream
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 10:30:11 AM in AEST
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Dont wake me, let me dream
Im finally happy, finally free
I see him smile
And look at me
Im not invisible
So let me dream
Everything is better now
That it is in my head
It makes me feel important
So let me dream
Life has no longer tried to murder me
It finally lets me have some hope
Finally gives me a chance
So let me dream
Things are easy now
Even if it is in my mind
But it still feels good
So let me dream
Dont wake me, let me dream
Im finally happy, finally free
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Re: Let Me Dream
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST
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| great write :D i really enjoyed reading this :) it made me feel happy |
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Re: Let Me Dream
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by Ess3nc3 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 01:12:21 PM AEST
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Ahh.. If life were only a box of chocolates with a refund, or a perfect dream. Sleep is a haven for some people. For others, it's just sleep. Nevertheless, excellent work. Good glow, very poetic and meaningful. I would have to say my favorite part would be:
"Life has no longer tried to murder me
It finally lets me have some hope
Finally gives me a chance
So let me dream
Things are easy now."
The way I perceive it, the dream world is the ideal haven. There are no restrictions, no boundaries.. Everything is blissful and perfect. That is of course, unless you have a nightmare.
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Re: Let Me Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 01:42:13 PM AEST
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in the mind the possibility for adventure is limitless. we can go anywhere in our minds, and nobody can stop us. very uplifting writing, well done.
with love,
phil |
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Re: Let Me Dream
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 05:36:58 PM AEST
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Great write, but remember
a dream is a dream but everyone has to face reality so dream and be free because sooner then later you have to face reality
Again great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Let Me Dream
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by simsalabim on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 07:53:52 PM AEST
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"That is of course, unless you have a nightmare"
nightmares rule. i guess my waking life is so dull i find nightmares to be fun. |
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