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The fountain
Contributed by
shanat
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Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 09:26:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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From the depths of the cold wet mountain
stood a beautiful great big fountain
they called it sunny day
cos it rose about starhill bay
why is it here we dont know
but we know it was built here long ago
the water that leaks is crystal blue
and glimmers fresh which is also true
so come and see this beautiful wonder
and drink the water which is further down under
rejoice in the good times you can recall
and fall in love again with them all:)
Copyright ©
shanat
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2009-03-11 21:26:12]
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Re: The fountain
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 12:27:56 AM AEST
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Well it might be what you call short but it's very sunny and awesomely powerful.
This one cracked me up.
More, please?
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: The fountain
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 10:58:42 PM AEST
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i like this one. i imagined this wonderful place as i read, now that's where i wanna be! great job, take care
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