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Where Did All The Magic Go?
Contributed by
toomuchfreetime
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Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 01:03:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Where did all the magic go
Back in Freshman year
When everything was new and bright
And shadows danced in evening light
And every moment seemed just right
Names written in the snow
Band tours sleeping on gym floors
Fulfilled a dream for me
And every holiday event
Was filled with sappy memories spent
Going everywhere that one guy went
And hiding behind doors
How these four years have sifted by
And now I'm where I am
Where everything's been done before
And gym floors only make me sore
Don't want anyone anymore
Don't let them see you cry
I don't know what has made the change
Four years ago to now
The holidays make my skin creep
Or stress me with duties to keep
Let me go home and get some sleep
My thoughts have rearranged
Some people say I'm more mature
And that I'm growing up
If that's what took the joy away
Then take me to another day
When simple magic seemed to play
Now nothing is for sure
Now nothing is for sure...
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Re: Where Did All The Magic Go?
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:01:14 PM AEST
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| I really love this. It is the same way I felt in school. You did a great job!! |
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Re: Where Did All The Magic Go?
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:18:26 PM AEST
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A very vivid look into your life and feelings.
Yes I too long for a time when things seemed laid back and simple. Life is so dramatic now and I am tired........ I relate to this. I do I do.
I have found at times in this crazy evil world and such drama as we know life to be now we need to search the depths and make and find our own magic or get sucked up in the depths of living in hell. Sorry I am having hard time right now and I see life as nothing but hell lol.......
Hope things get better for you soon
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Re: Where Did All The Magic Go?
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 05:55:06 AM AEST
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Happy days ended..magic went out..
A new phase of life with many challenges begins..reality now to be accepted..
Its an enjoyable write. :-)venkat |
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Re: Where Did All The Magic Go?
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 05:32:51 PM AEST
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You painted a vivid picture in my head and gave me corresponding emotions. Very enjoyable read...
I liked how you ended with "now nothing is for sure..." because it leaves it open to possibility.
With Love,
~Butterfly |
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