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Questions in my head
Contributed by
jaqui
on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:13:39 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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You're here and I'm there,
But do you even care?
We have a great time talking,
But what happened to you not calling?
You say you love me,
But is it really meant to be?
I wanna make this work,
But all it does is make me seem like a jerk.
You listen to all them liars,
And it's not taking us any higher.
Baby,why are you doing this to me?
How can you believe something you haven't seen?
You say you want to spend the rest of your life together.
But, to me, that dream is gonna fly away like a feather.
Baby let me know what you feel?
So i can know your deal.
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jaqui
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2009-03-15 17:13:39]
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Re: Questions in my head
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 05:17:33 PM AEST
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| Very touching. (((((HUGS))))) |
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Re: Questions in my head
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 06:34:54 PM AEST
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Lots of emotion and yes the questions.
Good write, wishing you the best in your answers.
Michelle |
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Re: Questions in my head
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 08:48:23 PM AEST
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Who is this????
Do I know you?
hmmm someone using letters of my name?
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Re: Questions in my head
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by JuniorWise on
Sunday, 26th April 2009 @ 05:42:10 PM AEST
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| whoa...i like this one. This is good |
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