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dam
Contributed by
polaris773
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Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 05:12:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Youre more beautiful than any words on paper
Deadlier than any femme fatale
Like the strongest dam protect me
From my overflowing world before I drown
You came in right before I couldnt get out
Broke the rules of my life to set me free
Now Im here with you
So I pray dont leave, youve set me in motion
Using the momentum to push through barriers
You help push with and keep me straight
Straight through the fire and brimstone
Of the world we overturned
Kill the bad thoughts in my head
Replace them with pictures of you
Lets rebuild and replace the mess
With our image of the world
Copyright ©
polaris773
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2009-03-16 17:12:18]
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Re: dam
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 06:35:07 PM AEST
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great poetry. you captured the whole experience of falling in adoration perfectly. the concept of being in a world of your own, the beauty, the power, everything. brilliant work.
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