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The Playground
Contributed by
angeldustx
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Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 09:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Life is the school,
Love is the playground,
we're just overgrown children.
Jumping, sliding, playing, taking those risks.
Some are just there to push others around,
be careful not to trip and fall,
be careful not to run too fast.
band aides will not do much,
just covers it up.
Time goes by, and cuts heal.
We learn from our errors.
When wanting to take another leap,
be sure to stop and think.
Remember those times on the playground.
Copyright ©
angeldustx
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2009-03-16 21:09:54]
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Re: The Playground
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 01:01:00 PM AEST
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a good analogy to put love with a playground. i like the way you elaborated upon it, i think it worked well.
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