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silent wind in the rubble
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 09:31:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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she wares her glasses
like a soldier a helmet
dark as the night
shes saved by the light
she puts on a velvet
purple smoke twirls
rapped around her
shes forever protected
from a world of war
without a heart
shes a prisoner above
such light of heart
she knows her truth
and the steps of false
that surrounds her
like the ying & yang
she puts on her stilettos
rapped fiery red
seductive at glance
lighted with a candle she walks
past the rubble
the bombs on set
she walks intact
for there is only peace ahead
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eternalsunshine
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Re: silent wind in the rubble
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:01:39 PM AEST
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Interesting write,
she puts on her stilettos
rapped fiery red
seductive at glance
lighted with a candle she walks
Loved that part too whooooo...
Michelle
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Re: silent wind in the rubble
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by BlueTheWolf on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 10:39:06 PM AEST
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| This is a really great poem. Nice job :) |
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Re: silent wind in the rubble
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 01:19:10 AM AEST
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Very creative, yet sad it's beautifully written.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: silent wind in the rubble
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2009 @ 01:57:08 PM AEST
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good writing, a lovely read.
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