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A Bullet
Contributed by
leopardpie
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Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 07:46:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A bullet came towards your face
You ducked to find your space
I was just there to be in the race
You missed your place
Because you didnt have the pace
I tried my best
You gave me no rest
You were the reason I left my nest
To be your guest
But I left and went west
We are not the same
No matter what you claim
I just want to find fame
And escape the blame
This is the reason I came.
I never wanted to be bought
But you wanted my support
Or so I thought
You just wanted to be caught
So you could make me distraught
Copyright ©
leopardpie
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2009-03-19 07:46:45]
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Re: A Bullet
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 09:55:01 AM AEST
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Nice writting like the flow,
and this--> line, We are
not the same No matter
what you claim. powerful
little piece . . .
ty likewise 4 your read . . .
Ben . . .
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Re: A Bullet
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 10:57:25 AM AEST
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it flowed very well, i enjoyed reading it. great work.
-phil |
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