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Emotional Warfare
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 10:48:26 AM in AEST
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oops
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I wake up and I yawn
stretch in the bed
stare out into space
and wonder if I am dead,
I am so bored
I feel so sad
I got no real friends
and I'm always mad.
everyday I do the same thing
time moves on slowly
I dangle on the edge
as I battle with emotions,
what is my purpose
there is no way of knowing
my wounds seem to never heal
the blood keeps on flowing.
I don't want but I need
to understand
why I never seem to know
what I'm doing,
I open my eyes
to see
if I am asleep
then I close my eyes
and dream of being awake.
EMOTIONS EXPLODE
my bloods flows
and I surf
the dark lava
on wounds that are never healing.
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2009-03-19 10:48:26]
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Re: Emotional Warfare
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by venkat on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 11:10:47 AM AEST
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awake or dreaming you are conscious of your wounds.. and you feel the explosion
of emotions...I understand your feeling of lonliness.. Well expressed emotinal write.
I wish peace and happiness to you!
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Re: Emotional Warfare
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by leopardpie on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 12:09:19 PM AEST
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| kinda dark and interesting hope you get over your emotional time |
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Re: Emotional Warfare
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 04:32:30 PM AEST
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Ya know, I really like this.
Except for the last few lines, I have so thought these same thoughts. Very well done and it just flowed so easily as I read it.
KEW-EL :-)
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