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Surreal
Contributed by
TUNA530
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 12:08:04 AM in AEST
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Sometimes things are not what they seem.
Sometimes you feel so empty inside.
You get that feeling, that presence of life, and you know youre not there, but you still want to be.
You want to be part of it, that moment, moment of truth, and moment of being.
In your eyes, Im nothing but a figment of imagination.
But, in my eyes I am much more.
Then I think about it, and I wonder if that day was real.
Was it a dream, when I met you?
You changed my life.
You gave me life.
Your presence, it seemed too dreamy, to much like a fantasy.
Did my mind create you, or did some other powerful being?
Youre so amazing, words cant describe my feelings.
Things are not what they seem, and yet, they are.
I was empty; I felt nothing until I saw you.
Dreams, they can be so realistic sometimes.
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Re: Surreal
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by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 02:19:54 PM AEST
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| It's truly incredible the way love can change our entire perspective on life...Beautifully captured, my friend. Great Write! Thanks for sharing! |
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