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Monogamous Belief
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 01:15:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And his fingertips
They barely touched mine
Despite the monogamous belief
He was my kind
Lets call a truce
Between you and I
Im taking him now
No matter how you cry
Although he may go home to you
His love comes home to me
Even if you give an ultimatum
This is how it will be
A hot night between us
Led to an affair I wont hide
Struggle in vain as you may
Or gracefully step aside.
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2009-03-20 01:15:36]
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Re: Monogamous Belief
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 01:27:40 AM AEST
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Wow this is really intense, well written and very realistic. I always feel for the wife on the receiving end of this stuff, hell mmm never mind lol.
Good work
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Re: Monogamous Belief
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by leopardpie on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 09:25:53 AM AEST
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| i liked seeing things from a different point of view as most never consider the mistress just the husband and wife |
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Re: Monogamous Belief
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 10:50:27 AM AEST
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yes, very intense. good writing.
-phil |
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Re: Monogamous Belief
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 10:39:35 PM AEST
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a tempting/seductive write...interesting as well from that POV.
"Although he may go home to you
His love comes home to me"
great line! that'll start a catfight! haha well done, take care
-K.Z.
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