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I am the skeptic
Contributed by
laurenmichelle
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Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 12:24:43 PM in AEST
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She is my past
I look for her and find her gone.
I thought she was the anomaly,
the one who would change it all.
I thought she was the only one.
Her eyes spoke of the future
She was a clear vision and always fading.
Searching in the sea of memories I drift to her.
I reach for her, and come up empty handed.
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2009-03-20 12:24:43]
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Re: I am the skeptic
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th March 2009 @ 02:09:07 PM AEST
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She was a clear vision and always fading
solid line there lots of meaning.
The entire write is awesome.
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Re: I am the skeptic
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 03:32:45 PM AEST
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even tho u say it's unfinished, i think it's fine the way it is. the last line is a dagger...take care
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